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| 08/09/2004 10:21:29 AM |
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| 08/08/2004 07:17:53 PM |
dei potentiæ carmenby labudsComment by photom: Hi Aleks and Greetings from the Critique Club
It is my pleasure to provide comments on this unique and wonderful image. You've done so many things right: composition, lighting, aperture selection, and placement of the text. (Many folks went way overboard on this challenge - especially with the multiple and gaudy fonts and colors.)
Your subject is simple - and your choice of depth of field adds mystery. I'd guess many did not realize what they were looking at but still liked the graphic colorful presentation.
I don't know whether you planned the black area for the placement of text when you set up ythe composition - or it just happened. In either event - it is perfectly placed. The fact that the words don't really mean anything - or if so - most peolple would not know the meaning - may have cost a point here and there. But "DPC" is not the easiest acronym to develop.
Improvement areas: I usually try to find something to leave as a tip - but I honestly don't think you could have done this any better.
Congratulations on a great entry.
I am a bit curious why you requested a cc critique as it doesn't appear you read comments - or else don't elect to mark any as helpful.
-Tom-
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| 08/08/2004 08:43:43 AM |
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| 08/08/2004 12:29:27 AM |
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| 08/07/2004 11:52:12 PM |
Predatorby labudsComment by scalvert: Great composition and perfect DOF. Probably the second-best bug shot in this group. 8 |
| 08/07/2004 01:51:21 PM |
Predatorby labudsComment by alisasaur: Eeek...I get squirmish just looking at spiders, but this is such a great shot I can't stop looking at it. I have a dilema ;) Great shot; The spider is perfectly in focus. Amazing job! 9 |
| 08/07/2004 10:27:38 AM |
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| 08/06/2004 05:27:05 PM |
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| 08/06/2004 01:11:17 PM |
Predatorby labudsComment by bpickard: have you artificially blurred the background?.....everything on the spider looks in focus and then a sudden change to the white background. Dramatic image but perhaps needs more colour |
| 08/06/2004 04:55:06 AM |
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