Cross Hatched
by lectrol

Comment by JackieK:
Intresting colors and composition, great job!

Cross Hatched
by lectrol

Comment by Fayea:
I really like the color here. The black lines set off the orange just right.

Cross Hatched
by lectrol

Comment by h2:
clean and simple, good color and exposure

Cross Hatched
by lectrol

Comment by kiumars_kashani:
very nice,8

Cross Hatched
by lectrol

Comment by madcrabber:
like the pattern and color here

Cross Hatched
by lectrol

Comment by whatdewuc:
Nice colors and light...an illuminated wall or walkway? Good luck

Cross Hatched
by lectrol

Comment by geekssweet:
Nice crisp focus and bold color.
Each cube unique by it's own distortion of lines within.
An eye catcher for me!

Failure To Connect
by lectrol

Comment by lectrol:
Sorry i had no time to add a long descrition. i litterally posted this last second! I first thought that it would be great to get the spark from the wires themselves, but that fell through. so i had to go to flint and knife which worked very well! Yes i know that it is speaker wire, but that is all i had, and i think the clear wire makes it look better. Thank you for all of the comments!

Failure To Connect
by lectrol

Comment by karmat:
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat

Congrats on your ribbon and new personal best score!!

Obviously, while the title is "failure" to connect, you did connect with the viewers. It is a very good idea, and very well executed.

The *only* thing I can really say about what would have made it "better" is that to me it cuts the frame in almost half, and this leads to a composition that is static. The eyes go to the spark, and that is about it. If there had been a way to set it on a diagonal (either corner to corner, or just part of the way), I *think* that would have more motion through the frame.

technically, very well done.

Again, good work. Sorry I couldn't add more.

Karma

Failure To Connect
by lectrol

Comment by finchda:
One word - "cool!" (or perhaps "hot")