Power of Flightby
dixonp1Comment by photom: Hi Philip and * Greetings from the Critique Club *
So what gives - you have a technically "perfect" picture - and it rated fairly low in the challenge?
By perfect, I mean the exposure is right on, image is sharp everywhere, the composition is effective, and the colors are pleasant. It was taken in bright sunlight on a clear day.
If the shot was of a UFO or some other less known object, I can guarantee you it would have scored much higher. You are the victim of taking a shot that everyone recognizes - and in its normal frame of reference.
When you shoot things like this, you need to find SOMETHING that will make it more unusual - like you did with your magical sunset lighting of the bridge across the Mississippi. Some ideas could be:
a) Wait for very late evening light - such as the bridge.
b) Take it with a zoom lens and actually move the zoom during the shot.
c) Using a deliberate show shutter speed to induce some blurring
d) Tilt your camera at a 45 degree angle to give it an unusual perspective - even though one comment said it should be exactly "level."
e) Take it on a day with puffy white clouds - or dramatic storm clouds assuming the airport stays open.
In other words it is now a great "record" shot - but not an artistic one. To score well, it probably needs to do both.
Next time you are in a bookstore - see if they have any books by Freeman Patterson - such as "Photography and the Art of Seeing." LEaf through these books - it will be good for you.
Thanks for shooting something new and sharing it with us.
-Tom-