Sagittarius
by weaverc

Comment by GinaRothfels:
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Edit: I wish I knew where this comment came from. I've had a few problems lately.

Message edited by author 2004-02-06 17:53:45.

Sagittarius
by weaverc

Comment by casualguy:
Would have been better with a fully drawn bow. Tough (back) lighting to work with (a little bright).

Sagittarius
by weaverc

Comment by Beagleboy:
I can't really put my finger on it, but something looks wrong about that bow. It almost looks like it is strung on the wrong side. The stance is unnatural and there is very little power put into the bow. I like the B&W treatment.

Sagittarius
by weaverc

Comment by nephrotic:
This almost worked very well. I am sure many others will comment on the same thing
"Care of your background"
The creases and particularly the line above the archers right shoulder ruin a potentially great shot. It looks, unfortunately like a "hanging sheet"
The graduation of light is nice - the semi-silhouette is great - the composition is great -
JUST THE BACKGROUND.
David

Sagittarius
by weaverc

Comment by newtune3:
I little too biright for me but I understand the backlight issue. The bit of string at the bottom of the bos could or should have been trimmed. 6

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by weaverc

Comment by Anachronite:
thATS NOT THE ACTUAL BOW STRING :O) VERY NOTICIBLE

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by weaverc

Comment by Kavey:
I'd prefer this to be either a true silhouette or to have fill in light that allows me to see the detail of the subject. This feels like it's randomly stuck in between the two. Pose and composition are OK, but lighting is the main problem for me.

Sagittarius
by weaverc

Comment by kcg:
Good pic, better if the bow was stretched out? Perhaps?

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by weaverc

Comment by garlic:
The position of the model not very dramatic, think more outstreching would be better. Also the model is a litle gray. More contrast or maby some other kind of lightning would have been better.

Sagittarius
by weaverc

Comment by Neil:
Very nice idea and composition. I think this would have been better if you had gone for even higher contrast, so the person was even more a sillouette, and the details on the background on the left were more obscured (that might have taken a fill light though, in addition to the higher contrast).