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RgarciaComment by photokariangel: This is Kari Ann, greetings from the
Critique Club:
composition: the use of the rule of thirds works well here, putting the bird into the cross hairs of two intersections. but maybe having it positioned a little lower in the frame would have helped the eye focus on it more.
color: nice rich colors, and i like the soft pale greens you were able to retain in the picture in the moss.
contrast: good contrast on the wood, but it almost overpowers the woodpecker, making my eyes sporadically move from one to the other.
focus: seems almost a little out of focus, by the increased amount of sharpening and USM.
depth of field:good depth of field, that background is so silky smooth
lighting: good lighting, but maybe a little too much light on the wood, again, it starts to overpower the woodpecker.
other: overall, a nicely done image, with a few distractions. the wood is a major contender for the spotlight in the photo, making the eye not sure of where or when to rest. also, the halo around the bird (particularly along his backside) is easily avoidable. You have some amazing work in your portfolio, keep it up. i always enjoy perusing aruond it in the wee hours of the morning, it really inspires me. If you have any other questions at all, you are more than welcome to PM me anytime.
-Kari Ann
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