The Endless Battle
by SolaireFlux

Comment by leskataus:
That is tempting.

The Endless Battle
by SolaireFlux

Comment by Prof_Fate:
would have been better if the cake / brownie had some fill lighting on the right side

The Endless Battle
by SolaireFlux

Comment by tfarrell23:
Throw the chocolate......AWAY....You might have tried for a bigger Photo...try taking...at the highest resolution.. then cropping closer to the cake..texture in the chocolate ...frosting....uuuhh....GOOOD..back to the photo....as you can see...I like chocolate..one more thing...too dark on your center subject... IMHO.....

Letting Go of it All
by SolaireFlux

Comment by justine:
I understand what your shooting/or what she is doing, but this is just not of interest. There is so much going on. The texture of the basket, snow, deck, rails, purple gown, trees, feet......too much happening here to really focus the viewer and draw them into the shot. I hope this is helpful and not hurtful. Good luck in the challenge.

Letting Go of it All
by SolaireFlux

Comment by admart01:
Your subject's pose lets me fill in the blanks. To make the shot better in my opinion, I'd like to see less of everything else. Cropping tighter on her, blurring the railing (as is it's fighting with her for my attention) The stuff in the basket is too small to let me know what you put in there but too busy to be a metaphor for stuff she's throwing away.

Letting Go of it All
by SolaireFlux

Comment by RedHotKK:
I can tell you are trying to say something with this picture, but I don't quite get the message.

Letting Go of it All
by SolaireFlux

Comment by nroot:
Compositionally, this feels a bit lacking, but the idea is there and remains strong. :) I think it's that the background is a bit busy and the railing adds to that. Perhaps this setup against a clear sky?

Letting Go of it All
by SolaireFlux

Comment by Rgarcia:
Very interesting perspective and take to the challenge. Nice lighting and message well conveyed.

Letting Go of it All
by SolaireFlux

Comment by GoodEnd:
Sometimes I want to do the same. Good shoot. I like it very much. If you are interested, I had some issues the can enhance it a bit. The first idea of Letting Go of it All, is free yourself of those chains to your life cycle, not? Well, in this regard, the bars visions are strange. Other issue is about the exposure that has ovexposed parts in the grid and at CD on basket. Good Lucky.

Letting Go of it All
by SolaireFlux

Comment by perempuan:
Touching, childhood memories? Good interpretation. Does the background a bit distracting?