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Comment by Mona:
Where is the rlling pin?

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Comment by caba:
Great job, very good idea, my top pick.

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Comment by karmat:
Uh oh, somebody's in trouble!! The crop and framing here is excellent -- it helps to build the tension. Also the body language speaks volumes, and including the faces may have hurt that -- especially if they were having a hard time keeping a straight face, or if their expressions were contrived.

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Comment by wwford:
I love this scene!

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Comment by leskataus:
I like how the heads are cropped off.

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Comment by dsa157:
made me smile. I like the angle and the wierd crop. it focuses all your attention on his shoes in hand and her impatience with folded arm and tapping foot. great job!

"Berry Smooth"
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Comment by Knotdamoma:
Yum! Looks good enough to eat!

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Comment by cbeller:
**Critique Club**

Hi Judy -

The composition and lighting on your subject is good. Interesting take on the challenge.

Possible Improvements:
There seems to be a bit of noise, as the subject is not in sharp focus. It looks like your focus may have actually been on the window. I think it may have looked better with a shallower DOF with the window blurred more. The brightness of the window is just a little distracting.

Good luck with your future entries.

-Chris

"Berry Smooth"
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Comment by Hye5:
Beautiful shot. My only suggestion would be a faster shutter speed if possible to better catch the smoothness of the pouring chocolate.

"Berry Smooth"
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Comment by tolovemoon:
yummy!