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| 03/15/2004 04:35:10 PM |
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| 03/15/2004 03:51:35 PM |
All That Jazzby jpochardComment by andywightman: Nice try but it is too obviously posed and the model appears ill at ease with the instrument. The face is also the last thing my eye comes to rest on since the frame is dominated by the rest of her body and the shiny trumpet.
The backdrop is a bit messy also in the bottom left. A drape of this kind is fine but put it slightly out of focus by using a narrow depth of field in order to lose the wrinkes and focus more attention on the model. |
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| 03/15/2004 01:05:51 PM |
All That Jazzby jpochardComment by Kavey: Nice to see a portrait that tells something about the model Background could be much more professional. Skin tones seem too orange. |
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| 03/15/2004 10:37:22 AM |
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| 03/15/2004 10:08:27 AM |
2:00 amby jpochardComment by Sonifo: Originally posted by unknowndeath:
He better put her in her place before hell is lose |
LOL...right, I think you mean the other way around. :-)
Great shot, Judy! |
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| 03/15/2004 10:06:37 AM |
"Berry Smooth"by jpochardComment by Sonifo: This looks like your background is in focus and your forground is out focus. Try messing with your f-stop. Great idea though. |
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| 03/15/2004 08:33:59 AM |
All That Jazzby jpochardComment by hughletheren: I play too but not often enough! Nice idea but perhaps the subject should be further away from the background to drop it out of focus and Imaybe I would crop to the waist and not crop the trumpet, giving a landscape portrait of a trumpet player - great! |
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| 03/15/2004 12:47:31 AM |
All That Jazzby jpochardComment by TooCool: Nice concept for a portrait. The only thing I would change is cropping from her midriff up above the horn. Great choice of background/clothing.
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| 03/12/2004 07:44:53 PM |
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| 03/11/2004 09:20:35 PM |
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