And in the dark she danced
by GoldBerry

Comment by LucidLotus:
I think I just lost the huge comment I left about your image by making it a favorite! Boo! Alright here we go again. I'm not seeing a connection to darkness other than the title, so I'm not sure what aspect you're trying to portray. Perhaps she's a dream girl? So someone you see dancing while you're asleep? That's the best I can come up with, but its likely not the interpretation you were looking for. That said, I really enjoy this image. It has a wonderful sultry look to it, which the use of the red and the model's expression helps boost. My one suggestion would be to crop a bit off the left side. While I think the red there does make for some interesting negative space, it just seems a bit too much, a bit too unbalanced. Perhaps cropping right where that dark triangle at the bottom left begins to form.. that way you still have an expanse of red but it isn't quite as much or as overpowering. So all in all I'm giving a 7, but I would've given a point higher if I was able to understand your darkness connection from what I was seeing. Still, very well done, thank you!

And in the dark she danced
by GoldBerry

Comment by Minstrel:
seductive and mystical. nice shot.

And in the dark she danced
by GoldBerry

Comment by tcrock41:
Way to bright. Maybe adifferent color would not be so bright.

And in the dark she danced
by GoldBerry

Comment by normw:
Sorrry this doesn't look very dark.

Wall of light
by GoldBerry

Comment by 0055:
Again...DAMN!

Free spirit
by GoldBerry

Comment by 0055:
DAMN!!!

Wall of light
by GoldBerry

Comment by GoldBerry:
hahaha thanks, it's nice when people notice I'm finally marginally above sub-par :-)

Wall of light
by GoldBerry

Comment by vince31874:
Your first 6. Awesome.

Message edited by author 2005-03-09 19:17:58.

Wall of light
by GoldBerry

Comment by deli:
nice! i'd like it if i could see more detail though. your model has a great expression.

Wall of light
by GoldBerry

Comment by melking:
Nice, very sexy pose!...10