Guns and Bullets
by Armadillo

Comment by zeuszen:
Excellent rendering with an explicitly commercial feel to it.

Minor but critical defects:
The near-centered target (background) skews the composition by thirds (foreground).
The far edge of the glass shelf (foreground) suffers from a anti-clockwise tilt, neither strong enough to add a dynamic nor imperceptible enough to be ignored.
A little more (reflective shelf) space in front of the gun may make for a more pleasing whole.

Because of the strong mercantile presentation, particularly when associated with a gun, I cannot rate this shot as well as I might have without these obvious aspects.

> 3 in my book; 4 in the context of this challenge.

my garage
by Armadillo

Comment by LoudDog:
Nice shot, good mood. Good luck.

Guns and Bullets
by Armadillo

Comment by DJLuba:
I would have love to seen this with just a black background. Awesome job on the gun and amo. Very cool...the target in the back blows it for me. Great concept!

I'd recommend a little more foreground, so we can see the top of the bullets reflect, and a solid well lite background. This is a really good photo minus that target.

my garage
by Armadillo

Comment by mayer_chik83:
wow, nice garage! ;)

Guns and Bullets
by Armadillo

Comment by inspzil:
Well taken photo. I think it needs a litle room at the bottom of the frame. Its just a little too crowded. Good idea and well shot.

my garage
by Armadillo

Comment by Fuzziet:
Nice high contrast black and white.

Guns and Bullets
by Armadillo

Comment by train:
Nicely done very sharp

my garage
by Armadillo

Comment by boomer:
Yikes! Guess you don't spend much time puttering out there! Good strong image, I like the b&w, and I think you cropped it perfectly. Good frame as well. 8

my garage
by Armadillo

Comment by legalsteven:
I doubt this is art you find "in a garage". However, since my submission WAS in a garage and was badly rated, I shall give you a 9. As a pic, it is a very attractive shot.

Guns and Bullets
by Armadillo

Comment by karmat:
Great work at keeping lighting glares to a minimum.