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| 01/02/2007 04:25:58 PM |
...swans a swimming...by sfaliceComment by locutus: Shouldn't there be a few more? Or should I count the reflections as well?
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On the shot itself, it would have been nice to have been looking at the front of the swans, rather than their backs. a good rule of thumb for nature shots is: if you can see both eyes, then maybe you have the beginnings of a good composition. I'd have cranked the aperture down a little as well - better to be underexposed on the water than over-exposed on your main subject.
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| 01/02/2007 11:29:24 AM |
Blue Shapesby sfaliceComment by Bruce_the_Robert: I like the composition here, the adjacent buildings fit together nicely. The coloring in the photo, though, seems a bit off to me, whether it's over-saturated or something similar, I'm not sure. It looks very processed to me (there is a hint of yellow, for example, on the lower horizontal stripe on the left building, and I don't think it's belongs there). A pretty nice shot, though, on the whole. |
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| 01/02/2007 10:57:12 AM |
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| 01/02/2007 04:44:36 AM |
...swans a swimming...by sfaliceComment by SaraR: I don't have a problem with fewer swans being depicted than the song indicates, although I have given an extra mark to those that either did find them, or had the patience to wait. That said, I am not scoring this high for a number of reasons:
The swans are a little over-exposed - if you are using a camera where you can choose the metering, use partial or spot, focussing in on the feathers; alternatively go with the cameras suggestion and then dial down 2/3 of a stop.
The composition lacks dynamism - the swans are swimming away from the viewer - there is no interaction.
The object dissected by the swan's neck (a moorhen, or a rock perhaps) jostles for the viewer's attention. |
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| 01/01/2007 11:02:46 PM |
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| 01/01/2007 08:03:03 PM |
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| 01/01/2007 05:57:02 PM |
Duck Watcherby sfaliceComment by Shmee: nice one Alice. The texture on the duck looks really soft, and I like the detail in the water. |
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| 01/01/2007 09:46:22 AM |
...swans a swimming...by sfaliceComment by noraneko: We'll just pretend the other four are right outside the frame :-) Like the composition, and good job of not blowing those whites. I might have dodged on heads a bit, since its advanced, but just my take. Nice entry. |
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| 01/01/2007 06:52:32 AM |
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