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Weighing In the Futureby librodoComment by kosmikkreeper: Hey Manuel! Great job! Your photos bring me back to my travelling days through Asia. You're handling your 4500 quite nicely! We could learn a lot from eachother!! :-)
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| 01/26/2004 01:13:35 PM |
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| 01/25/2004 12:24:55 AM |
Every Thursday Night, In My Neighborhoodby librodoComment by inspzil: Greetings from the Critique Club
By Inspzil
Composition - I didn't know what the stuff in front was, so this photo when I saw it during voting it didn't make any sense. I understand it a little more now, but I think that it might've been a little more conducive to show the foreground stuff a little more. The lens flares on this just dominate this image too much. Having some of the people moving seems a little odd too. I'd prefer to see them clear. If you were going to blur some of them, blur them all. One thing that I can't get past is that there is not a real focal point except for the bright lights.
Technical - For the speed of the shutter, its pretty well lit. I'm surprised the people have blurred that much at that speed. Originally I thought the colors were duller and you could greyscale this, but with the reds and blues, I don't think that's a viable option. Moving the camera angle down, getting away from the bright lights and giving a little more exposure to the foreground stuff that appears to be for sale would be my recommendation. Give the shoes the limelight.
Overall - This needs a focal point to me. I can't get past the lights. There are some intersting things going on, but I don't think the majority of the viewers knew what that was. Maybe focusing on the vendors more would've helped. Less lights, more clarity, a focal point and I think your score goes up. Good luck - Bob |
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