Oriental Mystic
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librodoComment by Bryuer: First, compositionally, it's really classic. So 'Do I like it?' Yeah, big time. I don't mind the color of the yellow on her skin, it compliments the eye shadow.
OK, I'm being picky here, but that's kinda what DP is about, right? First, is the photographer is in the picture? Check the catchlight in the eyes, especially the right, it's oblong, and the head(?) of the photog is in the middle of the light. Unconventional, but not appealing.
The loose hairs bothers me as it should have been caught before the shot was taken. This was, after all, a posed shot. So take the extra time and see with the eye instead of the 'heart'. She's beautiful, but also distracting. Don't let
her be distracting. OK, so the hair is there, Photoshop it out. Just a little more time to do it.
Pipae seems to have a line going thru the corner of her right eye just by the shadow. Don't know what that's about, but try Photoshoping it out, too.
My two cents. Good shot, really good.
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