Playground in Winter
by lilnukee

Comment by Mona:
Nice.

Playground in Winter
by lilnukee

Comment by nicoledb:
The impression you create is very nice. Could have improved by slight rotation CW.

The Fire In Her Eyes
by lilnukee

Comment by Rgarcia:
Very interesting idea, too bad that the flame doesn't stand out to strengthen the concept.

The Fire In Her Eyes
by lilnukee

Comment by RedHotKK:
Interesting idea, but I think you needed a larger flame to reflect in the eyes to really be able to pull this one off.

The Fire In Her Eyes
by lilnukee

Comment by faidoi:
Having both eyes in the composition takes away from the composition. The fire is quite small to make out. Focusing on 1 eye would give the viewer a closer look at the eye and thus the flame. Currently the slanted composition is fairly interesting and is still good. The b&w combined with the touch of color for the fire is good. "8"

The Fire In Her Eyes
by lilnukee

Comment by train:
Not enough detail really the shot itself is very good but the fire aspect is lost
good focus 6

The Fire In Her Eyes
by lilnukee

Comment by scalvert:
... the microscope in my hand. The flame is just too small. Perhaps if the fire was more brightly colored? I was going to try a similar shot + maybe one using mirrored sunglasses, but the reflections were too small so I gave up.

The Fire In Her Eyes
by lilnukee

Comment by adine:
I like this composition - the eye in one corner and the arch of the eyebrow diagonally opposite. Catching the reflection of the fire in the eyes is a great idea. It comes off as a bit too subtle - I would like to see more fire - like the reflection from a fireplace. 6

The Fire In Her Eyes
by lilnukee

Comment by peecee:
very nice idea, bigger reflections would improve it.

Playground in Winter
by lilnukee

Comment by admart01:
you've done a nice job of telling a story. I'd suggest leveling the picture and fuzzing out the background to isolate your composition - perhaps b&w because the only bit of color is in the backdrop.