Top Flight
by wwjdwithca

Comment by StevePax:
Excellent shot, great portrayal of Action. I think the only thing to improve this would be to make it a little more realistic - at least don't show the point of the tee. Cutting the tee off at the bottom would make it look like at least it could be set up somewhere. Still, a 10 from me.

Dreams
by wwjdwithca

Comment by JC_Homola:
Greetings from the Critique club
Ok, this is difficult to critique, There are two elements so I'll first comment on the image.

I'm afraid the image is not very good. After reading your description I can see what you were trying to do, I think. Giving the impression of movement to an object is difficult at best.

I'm assuming the brightness was an attempt to give it a dream like state. Possibly if you had done just that and not also tried to add movement it would have worked better.

It's better to not try and have multiple effects. There are some brighter than other areas spots, esp. on the face, that shouldn't be there.

Also using a stuffed animal rarely gets high marks. I also don't see how this one relates to the proverb.

RE: the text. There is too much of it for one thing. The Dreams is well done. Reversing the colours of the outline is a good technique.

The font at the bottom should be lighter. It's overpowering at this point. While it appears to be a similar family the fact that it is heavy causes it to appear to contrast. Japanese Proverb should be much smaller. And the proverb itself should probably be in quotes.

of course this is just my opinion.
JC

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Comment by Alexys:
Wow, wow... it´s one of the best picture of this week. I love the effect of movement. Furthermore, the colours are very beatiful. One of my favs. 10

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Comment by Kavey:
Cool - and the colours are zingy - has a surreal abstract feel to it.

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Comment by willem:
This idea is now recurring every challenge and it is loosing its appeal to me. I can see yours is slightly different, with suggested movement of both the club and the ball and the yellow piece suspended, so good job, but still....too often.

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Comment by CharlieR:
How did you get the pure blue background?

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Comment by BigSmiles:
verrry cool

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Comment by drgsoell:
What's holding the tee up?

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Comment by GolferDDS:
Good try at a difficult shot. I like the backround color. It sets off the subject well. There is an oversaturated white spot on the ball which I realize is difficult to avoid due to the exposure time. I wish the club was a little sharper at the point of impact. Interesting idea to show the entire T as opposed to having it sticking in the ground.

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Comment by brownt:
OK, how's the gold tee being held up???

Good shot, good take on the challenge.