kite flying society
by heartsdivide

Comment by Swashbuckler:
Good idea, but wow, I can barely make it out. Too much motion everywhere, good motion effects are usually better when limited. Lighting is poor, too bright on the left, too dark on the right. The person in the foreground is very unhelpful to your score.
Photo 4 Creativity 8 People 4 total 5

kite flying society
by heartsdivide

Comment by albright1:
Garage bands of the world, unite! Love the green carpet under the trap set!

kite flying society
by heartsdivide

Comment by jimmsp:
Too dark for me

kite flying society
by heartsdivide

Comment by Dangerous_blues:
Lots of motion here.

kite flying society
by heartsdivide

Comment by justine:
Garage band? Looks like fun anyway, just a bit too dark. Still a fun shot.

kite flying society
by heartsdivide

Comment by mpmcgeehan:
uh....

kite flying society
by heartsdivide

Comment by jmsetzler:
I would like this photo a lot more if it wasn't so dark and you could see the PEOPLE a little better....

The Pez Wars (now for PS2)
by heartsdivide

Comment by pauld:
Just need dozens of stormtroopers.

The Pez Wars (now for PS2)
by heartsdivide

Comment by irae:
The sidelighting isn't doing much for you here except throwing a shadow on Leia, and Darth's pretty much disappeared against the black bg. Shooting from above has emphasized the smallness of the pez dispensers. There are probably more dramatic, interesting ways to shoot this.

The Pez Wars (now for PS2)
by heartsdivide

Comment by ohsmom:
The pez need to be set up so you can see the Ewok behind the Yoda, and the C3PO on the left.

I think your light is too harsh on the right hand side, the shadows from the "dark side" are too strong, plus there is a shadow on Leia that is cast from Yoda. Try some fill in light on the right. Your backdrop cloth is too wrinkly.