passing thoughts
by heartsdivide

Comment by FranziskaLang:
there's a little pixelation visible, this is likely due to your very small file size (17k). try and use more of the allowed 150k. check out the tutorials (or PM me) if you need help. i like the composition with the note book only partially in the shot, and b&w is probably not a bad idea here, however, your shot is gray on gray. the pages should be white and you need more contrast. play with the levels in your photo processing software, even just using 'auto levels' makes a huge difference. -- gr8photos (4)

passing thoughts
by heartsdivide

Comment by bunnies:
excellent

passing thoughts
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Comment by Crystal Streams:
too dark. messy handwriting! nice concept!

passing thoughts
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Comment by Kimbly:
Interesting composition and idea...could do with a bit more contrast though.

passing thoughts
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Comment by mookyfish:
nice concept. wish there was something else in the picture.

passing thoughts
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Comment by jmsetzler:
I like this photo but the lighting is a little too weak for my own taste... = 7 - jmsetzler

passing thoughts
by heartsdivide

Comment by Digipixer:
Needs tighter crop,better focus,and more light.

passing thoughts
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Comment by miller:
I think the negative space would have worked better if you pulled back to show the entire book in a corner of the frame. Also, the focus is off and there's a lot of jpeg compression due to the small file size.

passing thoughts
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Comment by Gordon:
light needs some work I think to make this more interesting - a desk lamp, sun light, something to cast some more interesting shadows

passing thoughts
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Comment by sulamk:
Good idea but could have been composed better too much blank space detracts