Peter & The Great Pink Crayon
by muur88

Comment by bvy:
Great candid! Lots to take in. Hope someone's watching that kid... Seven.

Peter & The Great Pink Crayon
by muur88

Comment by dogz:
Nice title.

Peter & The Great Pink Crayon
by muur88

Comment by boyd2000:
If the boy and pink pole are the main subject the "crayon" should be fully in the picture. My attention is more drawn towards the two people talking. Otherwise, nice suburbia scene.

Peter & The Great Pink Crayon
by muur88

Comment by bspurgeon:
Just say no! You don't need to mow the lawn, rake the leaves, and wash the car on Saturday! Be your own man, just say no! (...and watch that kid before he gets squashed by a car!)If the you child is the subject, he is too far left in the composition. The adults are the subject in this composition.

Peter & The Great Pink Crayon
by muur88

Comment by J-Me:
Ahhhh......Suburbia where you actually see people out on the street talking as opposed to the urban centers where people just rush down the streets, not stopping to even make eye contact! I think that I would have cropped out the road portion at the bottom.

Peter & The Great Pink Crayon
by muur88

Comment by Balko:
Yup, this is suburbia!

Peter & The Great Pink Crayon
by muur88

Comment by jettyimages:
This looks like one of those 60's drawings of 'what life could be like in the future at ...... estate'. Very typical suburban shot, I love the couple arguing while young Peter defends the world with his pink light saber (crayon?), and the pumpkin on the step - perfect. Great editing (how did you do it????), well done, I'm giving it a 10

Peter & The Great Pink Crayon
by muur88

Comment by dillpick6:
The dodge of the three people and pumpkin/door and the burn of the house and car are a little too drastic in my opinion. On the same token, the image really feels like a print or painting. Great feeling of the suburbs.

Peter & The Great Pink Crayon
by muur88

Comment by LMA128:
10 :] i love this!

Peter & The Great Pink Crayon
by muur88

Comment by jblaylockrayner:
Nice tones and sharpness. I find the frame a little distracting and the composition a little awkward. Peter is too far out of the frame I feel. Does feel very suburban though.