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| 11/19/2003 04:02:37 AM |
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| 11/19/2003 03:09:18 AM |
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| 11/19/2003 12:14:55 AM |
The Power and Beauty of a Womanby EmerauldeComment by Neil: Well, I am not sure if your title was to evoke a response. While this woman has a great powerful look, the cigarette to me is a weakness. And a cigarette makes one anything but beautiful. So I am not sure what to make of this topically, though it is very well taken. The bit of smoke to the right center is a distraction (as is the whole cigarette). |
| 11/18/2003 04:37:12 PM |
Burning the Candle at Both Endsby EmerauldeComment by RiderGal: I really feel that there is a lot that could be improved here. I'm going to try and explain why I don't care for this photo, hopefully you will get something out of it. For one... I don't really see anything interesting here, ok it's a candle that has wax puddles on both sides, but there is no meaning to it besides your title. For me it was hard to see what it was, even after I saw the title. The straight down look to the shot is quite unappealing, while it is a different look then one might expect, I'm just not sure it works. To me this shot could have been made more interesting 1, with it on some kind of a stand looking at it from the side 2, with some sort of a bright colored candle (blue or green etc.) 3, I can't tell if it's burning or not, I think it is but it's hard to see, burning from the side, seeing the flame would be nice 4, a white background so that the wax from the brightly colored candle would show up brilliantly and 5, wait for possibly a drip to shoot the photo. As it is, I'm sorry, but I gave it a 1. |
| 11/18/2003 03:29:30 PM |
Work Can Waitby EmerauldeComment by StevePax: Greetings from the Critique Club!
This is an interesting idea for this challenge. However, I don't really find much about your execution that grabs my attention. I agree with some of the other commenters that the cord in the foreground is a bit too much, and that whatever is in the background is a little distracting.
Your subject didn't offer much in the way of color or contrast for you to work with. The whole thing is very monochrome and flat. Perhaps a little more dramatic lighting would have been more effective.
I hope to see more of your work in future challenges! |
| 11/18/2003 10:26:20 AM |
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| 11/17/2003 09:49:32 PM |
Burning the Candle at Both Endsby EmerauldeComment by Shelley: I think that if this was taken at a different angle and not from the top, it would have shown up mucj better. As it is, the flames aren't really very clear. Nice idea though |
| 11/17/2003 09:06:34 PM |
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