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| 08/02/2012 07:40:30 AM |
Bubblesby P-A-U-LComment by bsluijk: If I may add: I recognize what has been said and agree. Great bubbles, lovely scene, great expression on her face. Lovely shot. The "window to her smile" is very a nice touch, but I DO miss seeing her eyes ...
As to the overall composition: I like the hill to the right, not to keen on the boat in the background (would probably have cloned that away) and I would be curious to see the effect of a little lower viewpoint. And I hope I would have straightened the horizon.
But criticism is easy - first I would have to make a picture as nice as this one ;-) |
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| 08/02/2012 07:14:17 AM |
Bubblesby P-A-U-LComment by jagar: Actually I like the bubble on her face, it's like a window to her smile. |
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| 08/02/2012 07:00:26 AM |
Bubblesby P-A-U-LComment by P-A-U-L: Thanks Guys for the much appreciated feedback. Yeah the bubble over the face doesn't do it any favours. It was tricky as I was blowing the bubbles and taking the photos at the same time - lots of fun though:) |
| 08/02/2012 06:52:43 AM |
Bubblesby P-A-U-LComment by bassbone: John hits several great points about the light and DOF (f9 may have been a bit too small an aperture).
For me, there is a lot to like about the image, the bubbles carrying our eyes around the scene, the brightness of the jacket, the gorgeous beach scene, but I think what does not quite work (and this is a matter of less than 1 second) is that the girls face and eyes are covered by the bubble. Had we seen her eyes, this would be something extra special. |
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| 08/02/2012 06:48:32 AM |
Bubblesby P-A-U-LComment by jagar: Yes, there is something not quite right, the girls posture and the bubbles are spot on. The composition is also ok, I think the light was maybe a bit harsh and the depth of field could have been shallower. Sometimes it's just difficult to say what it is that doesn't work. |
| 08/02/2012 06:28:32 AM |
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| 08/01/2012 09:34:35 PM |
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| 08/01/2012 12:32:19 PM |
RIPby P-A-U-LComment by sfalice: frequently, religious themes don't do well on DPC, so your composition shows especially well with that in mind. |
| 08/01/2012 12:30:54 PM |
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| 08/01/2012 12:07:21 PM |
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