Soft Sea View
by Roan

Comment by dbosse:
Good composition, nice pastel colors, good sky... like the leading line of the drive and the curve of the buildings

Soft Sea View
by Roan

Comment by bmartuch:
This is cool but I think it would have looked better if you would have cropped off the left side up to the buildings. Just my opinion. Nice job.

Soft Sea View
by Roan

Comment by Luci11e:
I like this alot but I think if it had been mine I sould have cropped off the left side or took a big step over to the right so that most of that dark side was out of the shot

Sea at dawn
by Roan

Comment by UrfaK:
I think this is a good shot. Slightly standard but well done though I admit I had a 'is that radioactive algae??!!' moment. If it had been a darker green then perhaps it would have looked a little more natural.

Heart Rock
by Roan

Comment by Paul:
Greetings front the Critique Club:

This is a very interesting entry in a challenge I didn't really engage with. I like how your light painting has done more than just illuminate something; it has created new meaning and transformed your subject. That, coupled with the dreamy glow-like grass and the nicely coloured sky all contribute to a very convincing image.

Look at your histogram too - I nice peak in the 6s and a 10 spike. An image that certainly resonated with more than a few.

In terms of a critique, although you probably were horizontal, the lines of the clouds tricks the eye and I think a bit of counter-clockwise rotation might have sat a little more easily with the fussy.

Overall though - very nice indeed.

Soft Sea View
by Roan

Comment by Bill666:
Really nice, but the sky looks artificial. If the sky really was that colour the ground would have a blue tint.

Sea at dawn
by Roan

Comment by Chandi:
Wonderful lines and Beautiful colors on this one, although the prominence of the green is highly distracting from the rest of the scene.

Soft Sea View
by Roan

Comment by giantmike:
I like the idea here, although I feel something is just a bit off with the colors. Almost like the greens have been very desaturated and the blues overly so.

Soft Sea View
by Roan

Comment by Neat:
Oh what a winner, I love these beach huts, Front page for me.

Sea at dawn
by Roan

Comment by galatia_n:
Perfect light and look better with 1/3 sky, imho.