These keys open the door to technology
by xcharrier

Comment by TooCool:
To me this says repitition, but I don't get a texture feel here.
TC

These keys open the door to technology
by xcharrier

Comment by aKiwi:
Nice composition, lighting & focus.

These keys open the door to technology
by xcharrier

Comment by jpochard:
I don't think this ist a bad shot. Texture is there, lighting isn't bad - but it just doesn't have any pop to it. No "wow" factor IMO.

These keys open the door to technology
by xcharrier

Comment by GoodEnd:
Good light setup. You had revealed many textures there, but the side of the keys are a bit overexposed. Not all is perfect!

These keys open the door to technology
by xcharrier

Comment by e301:
The roughness of apparently smooth things :-) The angle is good, and the complex/simple contrast. My eye is constantly pulled toward the foreground keys, and then back to where you've placed the focal plane, whcih makes for a disconcerting conflict in such a minimal composition. I have no problem with the very shallow DOF, but more with the point fo focus you've chosen.

Letting Go of a Loved One
by xcharrier

Comment by sprite777:
It's ok. Definitely fits the topic, but the girl's face is not expressing the tear on her face. Is she sad, or did she just yawn?

Letting Go of a Loved One
by xcharrier

Comment by Brooklyn513:
IMO this would have benefitted from closer cropping and a little more contrast.

Letting Go of a Loved One
by xcharrier

Comment by barryg:
I like your composition with the subject being positioned 1/3 of right.

Letting Go of a Loved One
by xcharrier

Comment by devinbalet:
good image, dead space bothers me though. maybe good as a vertical with simular cropping on the face?

Letting Go of a Loved One
by xcharrier

Comment by colourmesassyx:
incredibly beautiful model.
i like this photo quite a bit.