In the shop
by Lawton

Comment by JaysWork:
The HDR is so contrasting in this photo, it looks more like a painting. Can be somewhat of a distraction. Nice shot though overall!

marbles in the sticks
by Lawton

Comment by dtremain:
Definitely bright, but something just doesn't work in the shot. I'm thinking that leaving out the marbles might have helped - they are difficult to recognize immediately, and are more like background interruptions of the image rather than subject matter. But, I think you are onto something with the contrast of long & straight with short & round - worth playing around with, perhaps with a more ordered arrangement.

marbles in the sticks
by Lawton

Comment by NathanWert:
I would have liked this even more if the marbles(?) were colorful too.

In the shop
by Lawton

Comment by PennyStreet:
Busy busy busy...

painting from a photo
by Lawton

Comment by digifotojo:
Well done!

Be more organized
by Lawton

Comment by giantmike:
I like the idea. The image seems to lack sharpness that could really make it pop.

mine
by Lawton

Comment by tnun:
oddly arresting. I think it is the clown and the lavishness of colour and shine in a strange key.

Be more organized
by Lawton

Comment by SwordandScales:
I see where you're going with the composition, and the juxtaposition of a variety of shapes is a good idea, but the execution leaves something to be desired.

The objects lack the clarity and texture I'd expect to see in this context, the background elements are present enough to be distracting, and the perspective itself seems a bit odd.

nibs
by Lawton

Comment by jomari:
Very nicely arranged.

nibs
by Lawton

Comment by GAP2012:
nice thought behind this :O)