Dry
by Flying_V

Comment by jonpink:
a bit less shadow and a bit more contrast needed IMO

Dry
by Flying_V

Comment by tyrkinn:
Strange crop, just between a close crop and a wide one, not for my taste at least. Maybe it would be better to focus on the top of the toast to get the texture "out of it". Good DOF.

Dry
by Flying_V

Comment by aKiwi:
Nice photo. The crumbs on th eplate distract from the "Perfect Image"

Dry
by Flying_V

Comment by admart01:
I can taste the dry! Would like to see a bigger dof and the lighting brought up a notch to see more of the texture inthe bread.

Dry
by Flying_V

Comment by justine:
I think the lighting and crop are hurting your shot. The focus is okay but either more light or closer to the toast. The table on the lower right is a distraction. This is a good entry and I hope you do well.

Dry
by Flying_V

Comment by relgraphics:
Dry toast, why didn't I think of that. Anyway maybe a close up and a cool angle would've been really great.

Dry
by Flying_V

Comment by e301:
Very very dry. With such an ordinary subject, so very mundane, I think the lighting needs to be extraordinary to give some punch: your light here is perfectly competent, the raking angle of it really shows the surface of the toast (and that puts you in the higher marks so far alone). Somehow you haven't really photographed that surface though - the concentration of the image isn't there enough. Sorry this is impressionistic, but then some criticism is.

Dry
by Flying_V

Comment by arbil14:
nicely done...

Dry
by Flying_V

Comment by Brooklyn513:
Color may have helped out with this shot.

The Early Bird
by Flying_V

Comment by Mona:
Very good and I like it.