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| 02/02/2004 09:22:08 PM |
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| 02/02/2004 07:59:12 PM |
Pen and Pencilsby NeuferlandComment by Drake: White at bottom is a bit distracting and not sure why the pen is out of focus and the pencils are not.... must be closer to the camera. Nice textures and colors |
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| 02/02/2004 07:07:13 PM |
Pen and Pencilsby NeuferlandComment by justine: The lighting is way too harsh and the shadow is tilted to the right. I think your light washed out the colors leaving this a little flat. I like the idea and composition. Do you shield your lights? Try that with some foil/plastic bag, or a light towel. |
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| 02/02/2004 01:11:38 PM |
Pen and Pencilsby NeuferlandComment by drgsoell: Very interesting idea. Sharp line between light and dark on left is out of balance with gradual change on right. Pencil colors are a bit overexposed. Good composition, just needs more color definition. |
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| 02/02/2004 12:19:51 AM |
Pen and Pencilsby NeuferlandComment by dsa157: I like shallow depth of field in shots but there needs to be one focal point that is pin sharp and here, everything is too soft. the base upon which the pencils are resting is also a distraction. |
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| 02/01/2004 08:50:50 PM |
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| 02/01/2004 11:27:12 AM |
Virgoby NeuferlandComment by nfessel: Makes me want to take a portrait photography class. This is beautiful. 9 |
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| 01/31/2004 01:12:36 AM |
Virgoby NeuferlandComment by train: Beautiful and soft I like this very much she is very pretty Message edited by author 2004-02-04 00:20:39. |
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| 01/30/2004 05:58:18 PM |
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| 01/30/2004 04:16:51 PM |
Virgoby NeuferlandComment by Kavey: Too soft for me (but I'm not a fan of that soft focus effect in portraits) and lighting is too strong... though that does support the angelic, virginal theme so it's not necessarily a bad thing. |
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