last day of school
by strechrt

Comment by Dphoto:
I tried to get passed it looking like a posed photo but the title won't let me. Sorry. Still a nice photo in BW. Good luck.

last day of school
by strechrt

Comment by saintaugust:
really? i'd be more happy.

last day of school
by strechrt

Comment by Neat:
Shouldn't that be a happy day LOL.

5 gum
by strechrt

Comment by jmritz:
I like

Cry now Laugh later
by strechrt

Comment by strechrt:
i jest have fun doing this

5 gum
by strechrt

Comment by hernan43:
Yikes.

5 gum
by strechrt

Comment by MaryO:
Sorry but this one just doesn't appeal to me. I think I would like it a little better cropped down to just the 5, and without the harsh light reflection on the edge of the package.

Cry now Laugh later
by strechrt

Comment by hernan43:
Could be a little brighter.

dismantled zebra
by strechrt

Comment by Tacoma28:
A little on the plain side

dismantled zebra
by strechrt

Comment by jamesgoss:
The way these are positioned vertically reminds me of makeup photography, specifically mascara.

Overall, it feels a bit oddly composed, mainly due to the ink canister in the center. It causes everything to be so spread out from each other, and following the leading line it gives shoots you off into space. I think I'd like to see this bumped up a bit in exposure, on my screen the blacks tend to recede into nothingness.