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| 01/25/2004 11:27:27 PM |
2000: The Year of the Dragonby RoosterComment by Koriyama: I like the wb, tinting the clouds with the red of the fire breath. A nice touch. I wonder, though, if a deep dof wouldn't have helped, as I feel that the clouds needed to be a touch more in focus, less bokeh. 6 |
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| 01/25/2004 08:51:51 PM |
The City that Never Sleepsby RoosterComment by dr rick: Greetings from the Critique Club!
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This is a nice view of a large city after dark. The shapes of the buildings show well here, and the thousands of lights create interesting textures throughout the image.
Creative choices
The panaroma format is a good choice for photos of this genre, and mostly works well here. The wide angle is perhaps too extreme for the small pixel dimensions allowed for DPChallenge entries (and especially the even smaller ones used here); it makes the image a bit muddy. The composition is a bit unbalanced, a lot brighter on the left, which makes the perfectly straight photo seem to slant slightly. The blacks are probably recorded accurately, but they aren't very black. Using levels to make them a bit darker would improve the image.
Technical aspects
The major technical problem is that a high jpeg compression created lots of artifacts that reduce the detail. The wind didn't help the sharpness either, although there wasn't much you could do about that. |
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| 01/25/2004 08:06:40 PM |
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| 01/25/2004 04:25:18 AM |
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| 01/25/2004 12:58:35 AM |
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| 01/24/2004 01:29:33 PM |
Happy Birthday MLK!by RoosterComment by MrAkamai: Interesting angle used in this photograph. Is the sign lettering really that darker gray? I ask because it looks a bit underexposed. Good overall image. |
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| 01/23/2004 12:39:43 AM |
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| 01/22/2004 06:30:42 PM |
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| 01/22/2004 11:24:23 AM |
Happy Birthday MLK!by RoosterComment by adine: Hear! Hear! Happy b-day MLK! I like your creative angle - almost like the sign is reaching down to touch us. The lighting could be better - hard to get it right with the bright sky behind - a flash might reflect off the sign nicely? |
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| 01/22/2004 06:43:37 AM |
Happy Birthday MLK!by RoosterComment by admart01: Hey, great catch - extra credit for matching the date to the theme to the shot! Very minor nit - the torn flag thing lower center detracts from the rest of the composition. |
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