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NeilComment by Paul: This is a new comment series for me, so please bear with me while I find my style!
(Voted earlier)
This is one of my 9s - I like it a lot. Furthermore I think it enriches the DPC collective portfolio. Put simply, I wish we saw more stuff like this. Let me tell you why it pushes all the right buttons for me:
1. This is a really compelling image - as much because of its strangeness as anything else. I think that's because the scene is not immediately recognisable - I can't really work out 'where' we are and the social context of the scene I'm looking at - I would say a large indoor space, but that's about it.
2. I really like the motion blur and how it seems to describe an arc. Did you swing the camera and then stop to overlay a more static scene?
3. The lights over there do much for the image - once again, it is the ambiguity of their context.
4. Some of the figures are marvellous - I'm actually less drawn to your main figure and istead find my eyes alighting on the central girl in the middle with the bag and the purposeful stride.
5. The overall light in the scene - just enough to make it interesting but not enough to lose the mystery.
Overall, a really interesting offering.