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Comment by dsray:
Overall, I like what you're doing here. If it is a generic wedding shot it's fine, if it's for a specific client I'd say she needs to be a third closer - ie, easily recognizable.

The dark 'bumps' in the far doorway to her right bother me, the large area low, is OK. I'd also like to lose the frame of the nearest doorway, it tends to emphasis the distortion. (I would like to see this with the perspective corrected.)

But I do like it. What does the color version look like?

Jess and Steve1 066trial.jpg
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Comment by zxaar:
I am not sure about others but i personally liked it very much specially the way you have composed it. Pretty neat.

Jess and Steve1 066trial.jpg
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Comment by surfdabbler:
Nice high key edit. As a photo background, or something like that, this would be great, but for a framed print, it would want to be closer in. Did you consider letting the photo run right to the edge, so that it runs right through your wide white border?

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Comment by Monique64:
I love high key shots. This one is lovely.

Every cloud has a silver lining
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Comment by JawnyRico:
Very nice composition. I like how the road leads up to the couple. Great tone and setup. Wedding shots don't do that great here unfortunately but I hope this is up there. Its one of the better ones. Nice work.

Every cloud has a silver lining
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Comment by stevieian:
Nice feel.

Every cloud has a silver lining
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Comment by JuliBoc:
Very interesting image -- happy yet ominous. 9

Every cloud has a silver lining
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Comment by debitipton:
off to "happy ever after" or a large house payment, 4 kids and a dog

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Comment by Jib:
6

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Comment by ryand:
Very neat shot, great composition, lovely tones, just an awesome shot, 9