Our Love
by jmritz

Comment by Azrifel:
I like the basic setup here, but....

There is the bridge at the left, that's an interesting point in the scene, it breaks the line from the right. Where both these lines cross you have a natural focus point for the human eye. The right side is now a bit empty, does not have a lot of interesting items in it.
Therefore my choice would be to move the two people to the right side of the frame (ask them if they posed, change your own position if this is a natural scene). That way you fill up the empty space and you have an invisible leading line from the point of the people's heads to the crossing of the lines of the bridhe and the rightside river bank. Most times it is better to leave more space in front of people when they look or move into that direction.

Apart from that, nice pic. 7

Our Love
by jmritz

Comment by Neuferland:
How sweet! Nice shot, a 9

Candle light in Paris
by jmritz

Comment by vrphotos:
table cloth is distracting, the back lighting is amazing!, loose the candle, loose the cloth and really explore that bottle!

Suddenly, a bad hair day
by jmritz

Comment by Neuferland:
It that's a real bird, that is amazing! Looks like it was a bit windy that day and I like the clarity of the shot bu there is something that seems a bit off to me. I'm not sure if it's the bird or what. It just doesn't seem to fit. And the two different colors of hair, one is a darker blonde underneath while the top is a lighter grey, makes me wonder if it's a wig. The cropping could also be a little tighter on the top. A a6

Candle light in Paris
by jmritz

Comment by ogdenm:
Perhaps too central and shot from too high an angle. Other than that pretty good.

Candle light in Paris
by jmritz

Comment by oogabooga:
meets the challange great
would be better with out the bottle

Candle light in Paris
by jmritz

Comment by Artifacts:
The lighting inside the left bottle is perfect.

Suddenly, a bad hair day
by jmritz

Comment by jaimeegrl:
Is that your pet crow?
The blurred background works here. It helps to keep the focus on what is goin on in the picture.
Good Job.

Suddenly, a bad hair day
by jmritz

Comment by ScantyNebula:
too much negative space at the top
focus is excellent
nice mixture of colors
interesting shot!

Suddenly, a bad hair day
by jmritz

Comment by Firstrich1:
Would have loved to have seen the models expression. nice idea for the challenge. 7