Break!
by nickyb

Comment by Alicia:
Greetings from the Critique Club. You requested an in-depth critique on your image, and here it is:

The photo itself is fun - you managed to capture excellent motion blur. The perspective is great, as well. Room for improvement: A little action with levels might make this pop more. The colors are flat and the lighting is dull. I'd rework it a bit to make this an outstanding image.

Why did it not score well? It doesn't meet the challenge topic. I think you scored over a 5 because of the interest of the photo itself.

In a different challenge, this might have scored really well.

Cheers,

Alicia

Church
by nickyb

Comment by tnun:
love the horse in the trees. surely this is what sacred heart is all about.

Church
by nickyb

Comment by mariuca:
And you took it while sipping a caffe court on the sidewalk. A good life . But don't call it just church. Sacre Coeur.

Break!
by nickyb

Comment by Tacoma28:
DNMC, I am not seeing how this is disassembled

Church
by nickyb

Comment by Melethia:
An interesting perspective to include the carousel with that horse stuck up top, not unlike the cross on the church...

Church
by nickyb

Comment by Zepcrmc:
So so

Church
by nickyb

Comment by epescala:
It feels a bit grey to me. Also i think it might have been better if you had focused on on of the elements instead of all three (the wall, the church and the merry go round). It just feels like there's too much going on.

Church
by nickyb

Comment by puzzle:
Very nice

Church
by nickyb

Comment by MeMex2:
Wonderful tones!

Break!
by nickyb

Comment by Neat:
Good shot...