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Comment by see:
Greetings from the Critique Club.
Hello Jon , I̢۪m Alan.

Let me start by saying I wish I could noticed you before we filled out our DPL team, I think your future here looks to be exciting.
I think you did a good job telling a story, or in this case song (a very good song at that). A nice play of the real with the surreal and I̢۪m a bit surprised someone on the Posthumous thread didn̢۪t showcase it. A proper critique should include a nit-pick or two, but to tell the truth I like it as is. Fantastic work..

If you have any questions on my insights please feel free to PM me.
Alan.

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Comment by MaryO:
Oh, cute! I though they looked like bugs even before I saw the title. Fun image :-)

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Comment by phlover:
Congrats on the top 10. I particulary loved this photo, lots of messages here.

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Comment by h2:
nice idea and well lit

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Comment by EL-ROI:
Very macabre photo! The smoke adds great effect giving the sense that something of a spirit nature is leaving.

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Comment by jayzundel:
how do you end up with the deep colors? i love it

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Comment by AbeSapien2:
Very creative theme flow & colourwise this is a treat - LOVE the title reference. It does look abstractedly haunted.

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Comment by BaldurT:
I like this, nice job on the lighting.

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Comment by Jutilda:
Well deserved. Congratulations!

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Comment by e10icus:
Hmmmmm... The title is somehow vaguely familiar to me.... I wish I had the tone-mapping skills.