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| 02/04/2003 04:01:25 AM |
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| 02/03/2003 11:33:49 PM |
Shapes, Color, and ... Pie?!by indigo997Comment by inspzil: Critique Club by Inspzil
Composition - It seems odd to me that the Pie here is square. Maybe that's the appeal of the pic. The pie is good. I like that part with the lime twisty and little whipped topping and all. The plate is okay. I reckon you gotta have a plate. The pink background, which looks like a sweater to me, is one of the things I don't like about this picture. It's probably a personal thing. I'm not fond of pink either, but I can't say anything like, "Well I'm giving you a 5 because I don't like pink." That doesn't fly. But the texture of the sweater is going a little diagonal. The other thing I don't like about this is the tightness of the crop. Maybe there is a reason for being so tight on the plate, I'm not sure but I don't think it lends itself well to this picture. The perspective on this pic is really predictable, very straight and to the point. The pie, no matter what it's sitting on, still looks yummy.
Photography - Good focus, exposure. DOF is not really an issue. Nothing to speak of really here.
Processing - Even less of an issue. If you did anything to this pic, I can't tell. You might have tried to saturate the colors a little more, but its fine the way it is.
Overall - This is a cut below your normal excellent pictures. I would've been happy with a 5.5 on my pic but I'm sure you aren't. The things that keep this pic from doing really well are due to the composition. It just doesn't have the WOW factor Setzler likes to talk about. The angle and crop are just very ordinary, like something I would do. It isn't typical Indigo-type work. Look forward to seeing more from you. I'm sorry this couldn't be more help to you. - BoB |
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| 02/03/2003 08:03:00 PM |
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| 02/03/2003 03:44:50 PM |
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| 02/03/2003 03:02:50 AM |
My Angelby indigo997Comment by Ziggy: This is a great photo! Just in my opinion though... I would like to see this one in B/W! |
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| 02/03/2003 01:39:44 AM |
My Angelby indigo997Comment by Silver Fox: Hope the child didn't get hurt when he fell from heaven. Beautiful picture, nice composition, sleeping so peacefully, the black background fits this photograph perfectfully. It does seem that the top feathers look a bit out of focus? or are thus just ruffled a bit? |
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| 02/03/2003 01:15:03 AM |
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| 02/02/2003 08:09:33 AM |
Shapes, Color, and ... Pie?!by indigo997Comment by Jacko: Beautiful use of colours. I can't believe I'm saying that about blue and pink, but it works really effectively. Lovely composition. great shaprness. Good luck. Jacko. 9 |
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| 02/02/2003 07:39:38 AM |
Shapes, Color, and ... Pie?!by indigo997Comment by aussie: Oh yum. Did you eat this after you took the shot? I would have..lol. Great colours pink, blue and white. Your composition is fantastic in the way that you have placed a square object inside a round object. Very creative. GL. |
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| 02/02/2003 12:01:34 AM |
Shapes, Color, and ... Pie?!by indigo997Comment by GeneralE: I don't recall seeing anyone use a knit tablecloth before. Using a solid color instead of a pattern would probably allowed you to save at a higher-quality JPEG and eliminate some of the other (slight) artifacting.
Pretty good job handling the white on white. |
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