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rcrawfordComment by HBunch: *Critique Club*
I like how we can see the ripples in the liquid in the glass. I DON'T like how we can see shadows in the liquid, especially the one that looks like a man creeping from the right to the left of the inside of the glass. Also, there is a shadow outside the glass to the right.
Focus seems a bit soft throughout. The finger is soft, the edge of the glass is soft, and the ripples in the liquid are soft. I do wish that at least the edge of the glass were in focus.
The background works very nicely here. The white creates no distractions from you image, other than the shadow created by your hand.
The angle and framing/cropping are ok. I like the closeness of the shot. I think that was important for showing the ripples in the liquid. Yo have centered the glass in the frame, which works for me here. I'm not sure if I'd like more of the finger showing or not. The crop there seems to be a bit tight, but not sure if showing more would help.
I think it would help though if the finger were in focus too. probably hard to do and get the ripples captured properly though.
Overall good, and it does portray some kind of sound.
~Heather~
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