5th and Westlake
by iammatthias

Comment by Nuzzer:
Greetings from the Critique Club.

First impressions are the yellow colour cast (as I noted when voting).

Technically the colour cast could be sorted in post processing to a large degree with a levels adjustment. Composition is good but it appears a hard image to get all the buildings feeling vertical - the right most one feels off. The lights are bordering on over-exposure but the star forms they make are nice.

Artistically this is ok but I don't feel much from the shot. I think there is too much going on in it - the van, the light trails, the overhead lights, and the blown out sign right in the middle.

In summary this was a good location but overall the exposure was a little too long and the PP needed to go a bit further.

Feel free to PM me if you have any queries.
Gerry

5th and Westlake
by iammatthias

Comment by liberty:
Makes me think catsup and mustard...Nice comp, 8.

5th and Westlake
by iammatthias

Comment by Nuzzer:
Unfortunate yellow cast

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Comment by Keith_W:
Nice shotof the shooter.

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Comment by bennettjamie:
A little underexposed I think, but okay.

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Comment by DaleFrazierPhotography:
Nicely done, Keep up the great work.

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Comment by cowboy221977:
Good DOF but prob should have used flash to light face a little better.

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Comment by jjstager2:
This works for me.

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Comment by ben4345:
ewww, canon... ;)

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Comment by disassociation:
great colors!