Oops
by Marty

Comment by disassociation:
wonderful capture! strangely evocative...

iJuggle
by Marty

Comment by tvsometime:
Nice montage.

Oops
by Marty

Comment by J-Me:
Pretty cool that you managed to capture the main subject pretty well in focus and yet, still show camera movement. Very nice!

Oops
by Marty

Comment by Balko:
nicely done -8

Good night.
by Marty

Comment by ericwoo:
Hey there from the Critique Club

Well first of all, WELCOME TO DPC. Its one of those places that you will love and hate all at the same time. Welcome and congrats on getting that first entry in!

My thoughts on the image: This is a nice start. While not scored over the midpoint yet, this is still a nice way to begin. I love the warmth you captured on the face of your subject. The subject is also nicely focused and crisp.

My ideas for improvement: I'd like to see a little better composition. While I am no stickler for the 'rules of photography' this one is a little too centered for my tastes. I think that I'd even like a square crop best on this particular capture, thus cropping off some of the emptiness on the left hand side of the frame.

Where I would have/did score this entry: In this particular instance, I agreed with the voters. I voted this one at 5, but it truly wasn't far from pulling a 6 or better. Nice work and again, WELCOME!

Thank you for the opportunity to provide a critique on your entry,
Eric

iJuggle
by Marty

Comment by acg83:
I like the different take on the borders and the trails on the balls. But perhaps some more vibrant colours could make this stand out more.

iJuggle
by Marty

Comment by ahjenny:
I like the trails and that the pictures aren't cut up into squares for separation.

iJuggle
by Marty

Comment by HarveyG:
Nice concept and framing.

iJuggle
by Marty

Comment by dtremain:
I like the unorthodox divisions of the panes. You've done a very good job of continuity and motion through the panes. The counterclockwise motion of the ball path is opposite of what Western culture expects to see - not sure if that is a deliberate distraction. IMO, this could have been a bit brighter / well lit overall - the top is almost too dark.

iJuggle
by Marty

Comment by jgoings:
very creative layout! seems a little underexposed.