7 Habits of Highly Effective Writers
by nikon_girl

Comment by saintaugust:
you should have used a JD bottle.. writers tend to drink a lot. :-)

7 Habits of Highly Effective Writers
by nikon_girl

Comment by BikeRacer:
I like the idea for this shot, but think you could have tried playing with different angles to increase subject isolation and drama. Also, the slight color casts seem unintentional, i think this shot could have worked better as a straight grayscale.

The Touch of a Master
by nikon_girl

Comment by a8j2:
lovely.

Boundaries
by nikon_girl

Comment by bclements:
Like the perspective of the fence in this photo. Would like to see it in sharper focus.

Boundaries
by nikon_girl

Comment by whiteroom:
nice angle

Boundaries
by nikon_girl

Comment by jmsetzler:
Interesting perpsective and good tonality... I can't really find much meaning or intrest in the subject choice...

Uncanny Perseverance
by nikon_girl

Comment by DefyTime:
::Critique Club::

Others have already pointed out that you could have used more Depth of field. This might have been hard due to light, might not have had a tripod with you, and even if you did the bug would move and would be blurry. Try shooting at least with a 1/125 shutter, see if that gives you alittle more aperature to work with. You can also bump your ISO up to get more, but that will make it that much more grainy. You have to give and take. Personaly I would have liked to see his face. Other than that good attempt.

Message edited by author 2004-11-16 14:39:01.

Uncanny Perseverance
by nikon_girl

Comment by deapee:
hurts my eyes, personally to look at it for too long...hard to tell what is in focus, maybe because of the lighting?

Uncanny Perseverance
by nikon_girl

Comment by arpita:
DOF is distractingly shallow.

Uncanny Perseverance
by nikon_girl

Comment by nsmith:
Nice