Twisted P
by outofthisnature

Comment by glad2badad:
Interesting sculpture in a chaotic presentation.

Twisted P
by outofthisnature

Comment by ahjenny:
Nice picture. The background is really pretty.

Twisted P
by outofthisnature

Comment by Jaded_Housewife:
*not voting as I'm in this challenge-just commenting since I've seen requests for comments in the challenge thread*

Gotta say.... I don't see a P. I see a backwards P. May have helped to flip the shot so it was facing the right way for your title. Not sure if that's allowed in basic though. hmm.. I'll have to look into that. Very interesting clouds in this shot. Nice capture.

Twisted P
by outofthisnature

Comment by Melethia:
Quite an interesting approach!

Morning Juice
by outofthisnature

Comment by HarveyG:
I liked the title, and sky, but the trees were a bit distracting.

Morning Flight
by outofthisnature

Comment by BJokerud:
I can't decide on this one. The powerlines in the middle of the photo is a bit distracting. I think this photo would be more dramatic without them. That would make it more... endlessly or something. It also seems that your focus is on those powerlines.

Coming back to add... Forgot that it was basic editing, but I'll leave my comment as it is anyway.

Morning Flight
by outofthisnature

Comment by ChadH:
The color is nice, and the reflection on the water. I wish the bird was a more prominent element, especially with the title.

Morning Flight
by outofthisnature

Comment by Niecy:
Gorgeous color tones.

First Aid For Your Soul
by outofthisnature

Comment by Budya:
Greetings from the Critique Club and welcome to DPC!

First impression: I have hard time figuring out what this is without reading your notes. The photo does not grab my attention for very long, I find the background bokeh more interesting than the main subject.

Technicals: Lighter background grabs my attention, I wish there was more light on the subject so that a viewer can appreciate all the dents and textures of the metal and the wood. While the focus is good, your composition is too central for me and I feel that a tighter crop would have put more focus on the subject and made the photo more interesting.

Final thoughts: For someone not familiar with the culture, it is hard to figure out what this photo is about, the lighter background took over your photo. Focusing on a specific element -- contrasted textures, a drop of water, etc. would have provided more reference points for the viewer.

Please feel free to PM me with any questions.

Cheers,

Anna

First Aid For Your Soul
by outofthisnature

Comment by BeefnCheez:
I dont get it, maybe i'm too young. I'll come back to this later maybe i'll see it. 5 for now