Line Between Life & Death
by Rehtse

Comment by VitaminB:
Greeting from the Critique Club

You won the (not-so) coveted brown ribbon with your first entry to DPC. Hope that doesnt discourage you from entering other challenges.

While the shot didn't score well, I feel that it really does meet the challenge well. This photo shows life and death together in the same frame. Visually, however, the composition could be improved. Perhaps getting lower to the ground to get a different perspective may have improved the shot.

In the end, you did get a favorite, which doesnt happen very often, so there is a small victory there.

VitaminB

Line Between Life & Death
by Rehtse

Comment by LadyK:
see, i think this is a great idea. maybe a different angle, like looking down the line to the horizen, might have helped your score.

Line Between Life & Death
by Rehtse

Comment by Seraphemme:
My first thought when I saw this photo was "What is this a picture of"? Maybe bright colors would have made the distinction more pronounced. Maybe some type of frame or separation. Good subject, just doesn't seem to get hte message across.

Line Between Life & Death
by Rehtse

Comment by Jason_Cross:
That one blade of grass is like "whew!"

Line Between Life & Death
by Rehtse

Comment by Nany:
Wow. . . this picture is deep for the way you presented and its delightful how can we see life and death, but we can really see the "line between life and death". Good Work!

Line Between Life & Death
by Rehtse

Comment by kmusser:
Not impressed with this one at all.

Line Between Life & Death
by Rehtse

Comment by albc28:
Just not really that interesting.