I Will
by JoeyC

Comment by Senay:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

First Impression: I felt that it was a very nice portrait of a bride who must have been very happy when she received this!

Composition: Tilted angle works good, I like the line created by the dress and the black background.

Technical: The eyes are awesome! For the lighting maybe some more light could have been on the right side so that the hair does not blend with the background as much, although the lighting is great the way it is just a small detail.

Final thoughts: The only thing that could be done to improve this image would be to include all or more of her head.

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Senay

Pick Me
by JoeyC

Comment by KarenNfld:
Nice lighting.

I Will
by JoeyC

Comment by vlado:
Nice composition, colour and detail. Looks like a little but of a forced smile... her teeth say "happy", but her eye's are saying "get this over and done with". Also, not a fan of the angle... but that's just personal preference... I guess.

I Will
by JoeyC

Comment by gwe21:
very pretty.

I Will
by JoeyC

Comment by Alicia:
Nice colors and perspective. I feel her skin is a bit too smooth, so she looks a little like plastic. Overall excellent image, though.7

Pick Me
by JoeyC

Comment by glad2badad:
Certainly straight-forward and simple. Lighting is "ok". What's hurting this is the front apple not being sharply focused like the other.

I Will
by JoeyC

Comment by andrewt:
The eyes lack a little crispness IMO , otherwise excellent wedding shot , 7

Main Street
by JoeyC

Comment by justine:
Good clean shot, focus is spot on.

I Will
by JoeyC

Comment by NikonJeb:
This angle doesn't work so well for me, but it's still a good image for its purely technical excellence. Good color & lighting......6

Main Street
by JoeyC

Comment by Nuzzer:
It looks like the DOF was too shallow as the building at the end is OOF but I can't decide what you wanted in focus - the car?