Blue Amongst the Whites
by BeefnCheez

Comment by Ja-9:
this was a very good idea...to bad you didn't make a circle of the blue chips...that would have really made this shot

Fancy Balls
by BeefnCheez

Comment by timfythetoo:
Greetings from the Critique Club -

First let me welcome you to DPC. I hope you get as much enjoyment out of this place as I have.

This picture unfortunately doesnt grab me. I am not really sure what it is, not sure I want to know what it is. From looking at your notes I can see that you werent really that crazy about it either. One day you will look back at this and laugh (I have many pics that I look back at and wonder what I was thinking entering - way too many). But dont let this deter you. Keep on playing, keep on learning, keep on entering and find out who it is that you are as a photographer. It's a neverending journey. I hope you have fun with it.

Tim

Blue Amongst the Whites
by BeefnCheez

Comment by Cheerz:
Good shot.. nice composition and framing..

Blue Amongst the Whites
by BeefnCheez

Comment by faede:
Very clever. Nice shot.

Fancy Balls
by BeefnCheez

Comment by ThatChickOverThere:
You need to work on focus. I don't see a sharp focus anywhere here. Also, there is a bit too much noise.

Fancy Balls
by BeefnCheez

Comment by DJWoodward:
Challenge Relevance:5 Impact/Emotion/Mood:2 Technicals:3 Processing:4 Creativity:4

Fancy Balls
by BeefnCheez

Comment by scooter97:
An interesting subject for sure. A little more DOF might have helped this have more impact.

Spam Mail is really Stacking up on my Computer
by BeefnCheez

Comment by BeefnCheez:
I agree with the comments. I didn't like the plain envelopes either and would have like to have used a desk or wood table. Thanks for commenting! and leaving useful comments!

Spam Mail is really Stacking up on my Computer
by BeefnCheez

Comment by DJWoodward:
Challenge Relevance:7 Impact/Emotion/Mood:5 Technicals:5.5 Processing:5.5 Creativity:6

Spam Mail is really Stacking up on my Computer
by BeefnCheez

Comment by dtremain:
For me, the unused envelopes as props don't quite cut it. The laptop is a bit hard to see. Creative idea, though.