Climbing Mt. Sentinel
by silverleaf

Comment by willow_zzen:
I really like the simplicity of this image.

Climbing Mt. Sentinel
by silverleaf

Comment by tonyv:
Simple composition and great colours. But it does lack a focal point.

I miss you
by silverleaf

Comment by mandyturner:
*Critique Club*

Cute Kid! Her clothes are adorable and they go great with the background. This picture is sort of a snapshot. What you could have done to make it more appealing would have been to take the picture from the same point of view, just include all of her in the photo-all the way down to the ground. You cropped it in a little too close on the sides I think. Her BIG brown eyes make your heart melt! This would have been so much better with a different perspective. Cute picture, just not a greeting card type photo. Good luck in future challenges and remember to try different angles to get the best look.

Mandy

The Celebration Beverage
by silverleaf

Comment by silverleaf:

Originally posted by zara-opal: boring

I can appreciate that you didn't like the photo, but do you really think that this was a helpful post? I think that if you don't have anything positive to say, why say it? Just my opinion, but I thought we were in this to help each out to become better photographers, not just knock each other down. I am sure you are a great photographer with lots to offer, so why not be positive?

Climbing Mt. Sentinel
by silverleaf

Comment by trnqlty:
That black border is really powerfull, maybe too much. Perhaps white would be better.

Climbing Mt. Sentinel
by silverleaf

Comment by Germaine:
I'd get rid of the heavy black border. Otherwise, great colors. Great diagonal line.

Climbing Mt. Sentinel
by silverleaf

Comment by Elaine:
I think this needs a focal point.

Climbing Mt. Sentinel
by silverleaf

Comment by arngrimur:
I like the colours but i find the border a bit too heavy.

The Celebration Beverage
by silverleaf

Comment by Dvosdon:
Would be better without the half-person in the background and with the rule of 1/3 applied for the bottle

I miss you
by silverleaf

Comment by LeeD:
Love those big brown eyes. Adorable little girl, but the image seems a little "snapshot-like" to me.