Debugging
by C-Fox

Comment by jmsetzler:
This shot would be more interesting if something was in focus.

Debugging
by C-Fox

Comment by kiwiness:
Clever idea, unfortunately far too blurry to recognise everything.

Debugging
by C-Fox

Comment by jonpink:
Good Points: none at all sorry ;(
Bad Points:soo blury it's uncomfortable. Messy subject unlear what were looking at
Score:1

Debugging
by C-Fox

Comment by Hardfire:
too out of focus and blurry

Debugging
by C-Fox

Comment by crabappl3:
Ah, those in the business will understand this image. It's where the term comes from. I think you may have pushed past your camera's limits with this image. You have either cropped into a smaller area of the image, or the macro capabilities of your camera don't allow focus at this close of a distance. Your overall composition isn't bad, but you have all your elements bringing the eye to the center of the image. The angle of the tweasers, the moth, then the 3 round things all make for a very center weighted image. Your choice of lighting is probably a standard indoor light. You may want to see if your camera has a custom white balance for the type of lighting you used. Your image has the typical yellow tint to it due to the lights.

Things I might have tried: Custom white balance, landscape mode so as to allow more room for the tweasers and moth. Maybe bringing in the tweasers from another angle. The lighting may have worked better if it had been bounced off an object above your prop, so as to be a more diffused overhead light. I may have lowered the angle of the camera to introduce a 3rd dimension to the objects. Their current orientation leaves them lifeless and flat.

I do think that this concept is worth playing with. Addressing the limitations of your camera and lighting, I think that you have the possibilities of making a nice iconic piece of art.

Urban Refinery Row
by C-Fox

Comment by dsa157:
I like the strong lighting on the foreground buildings and the subtler lights on the ones in the distance. I would have cropped out the pipes at the bottom and the streetlight on the right. The horizon looks crooked as well.

Urban Refinery Row
by C-Fox

Comment by Neuferland:
Look at that smog! Or is that evening mist? I'm guessing smog since it's refineries. :) I love the concept that you were going for but the shot itself leaves me wanting, the lights are a bit too fuzzy and the total darkness at the bottom of the shot is a bit distracting to me.

Urban Refinery Row
by C-Fox

Comment by mighty_bison:
Excelent comp. Impressive photo. Perhaps the furthest street light could have been angled inbetween the silhoette of the buildings.

Unicorn Rain
by C-Fox

Comment by larimarie:
OHHH WOW!!!

Unicorn Rain
by C-Fox

Comment by dsidwell:
Interesting effect. I have to be honest and say that this lovely photo would be better without the unicorn. The effect of the sharp rose and how it contrasts the fuzzy white and interesting background is very, very nice.