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Comment by dacrazyrn:
I like the softness most people use with portraits, but this is too soft for the amount of light on the subject, for my tastes

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Comment by rickhd13:
focus seems too soft...I do like the tight crop...the model looks very much at ease for you

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Comment by drydoc:
Like the up close and personal feeling. Soft and a tad fuzzy. Just a little too close a crop on the nose. BOL

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Comment by ccraft:
This person has a really nice expression. My only suggestion would be that, with teh way you've posed the shot, you need a bit more negative space. I think the expression may even be enhanced if it stood out against a bit more of a background/negative space. The jaw bone isn't as important in this pose as the smile and eyes so the composition just needs a tiny bit of a jiggle. Overall a nice portrait though. Good luck!

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Comment by boomer:
I'm not sure how you did this, but his face is too "porcelain-y" for my taste. That's just me, remember. It's kind of flat or something. The little blue spot on the upper right corner is a bit distracting. I can't vote so don't worry, I didn't bring down your score!

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Comment by amandawriter:
I really want to know what she's looking at - great image!

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Comment by vmagic118:
Too Much what seems to be a gaussian Blur filter, you took too much definition fronm the skin texture, Nice composition although

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Comment by justine:
I like this funky white/fade look here. I will say it's not very natural looking..?beard? Still for a close shot as this one, it's okay. I think the crop is alittle close to his nose and I wish we could see his eye more. Not a bad shot. Hope ya do well.

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Comment by peggy:
Too cold. Too bright. Perhaps too close up.

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Comment by hughletheren:
An interestingly tight crop and very soft focus; muted tones too. It is growing on me!