asunder
by lau

Comment by sjgleah:
Needs a steeper angle. If judged independent of the contest, I love it.

asunder
by lau

Comment by Crystal Streams:
I cant tell what the main interest point is. Somehow the house in the background is what catches my eye. What is that in the foreground? I like it in B&W--

asunder
by lau

Comment by moondoggie:
Interesting title and image. Not really sure what it is I am supposed to be looking at here, but I like the feel and mood created by this image.

asunder
by lau

Comment by Patella:
nice moody black and white with lots of good textures

asunder
by lau

Comment by FranziskaLang:
Nice black and white, love the composition. Not sure the angle is up, but it sure is from the ground.

asunder
by lau

Comment by irae:
Not that it bothers me, just trying to be clever, but I'm pretty sure the camera was pointed down for this one since the 'horizon' of the porch is more than halfway up the frame. I guess the reflections are the bit that addresses the challenge, but what's reflected isn't really apparent.

asunder
by lau

Comment by itsaghostcar:
great use of b&w here ... it really sets the mood. Although you have strong lines from the floorboards and the mat? the camera is on leading away from the house, the bright light from the entrance to the verandah really makes you look there.

asunder
by lau

Comment by tnwarriorpoet:
I really enjoy the composition of this pic...it pulls me in wonderfully. Well done!

asunder
by lau

Comment by Speigner:
Interesting, the off kilter horizon and dark foreground give it an almost sinister foreboding effect.

asunder
by lau

Comment by lisae:
There are lots of interesting things in this photo but it's one of those ones where I feel like the elements don't mesh together to provide a whole piece, rather they compete for attention. Eg., the house in the background, the vertical posts, the wet floorboards, and the carpet... nothing takes the focus, everything causes a distraction from everything else. One thing on its own would have been a better subject.