joey and kristina
by FourPointX

Comment by colorcarnival:
Oooh moving into portraiture now, eh? Is this your son? What a happy looking guy. I think the comment you got below is full of GREAT tips. Keep at it!

joey and kristina
by FourPointX

Comment by kasaba:
I apologise, I am new to this and you are "stuck" with my comments. Pls. realise that this is *my* learning curve more than yours!
I like the way you used the "V" in the sky to frame/draw attention to the 2 people's faces. I love the colour composition with the sky and the human skin.
I would have cropped the picture a little more to get rid of the girl's stomach - not because I have an issue with short tops, but because the stomach as well as the man's arm keep drawing the eye away from the faces (at least it does for me :-)). mabe you could have edited the few reflecting spots out of the background to tidy up the image and also darkened the car on the left a bit more. I think the lighting on the people is good and the soft focus flatters their youthful faces.

hi!
by FourPointX

Comment by colorcarnival:
Chompy! Good job... look at the score distribution too. Excellent - no extremely low votes. Commenters liked it too :)

hi!
by FourPointX

Comment by tanguera:
I love this. I wish there was some way to isolate it a bit more, maybe darken the surroundings? Great find.

Fe2O3.nH2O
by FourPointX

Comment by blindjustice:
i get it... "rust" well done.

hi!
by FourPointX

Comment by npasel:
Now that's some metal.

birthday in the cube farm
by FourPointX

Comment by SwordandScales:
I get the idea, but I don't get much out of the shot.

hi!
by FourPointX

Comment by blindjustice:
nice find!

hi!
by FourPointX

Comment by jomari:
Wow! That's one cool alligator.

birthday in the cube farm
by FourPointX

Comment by ray_mefarso:
i like the contrast of the bright colours against the dullness of the office. The perspective and tilt is a bit unsettling