carnie
by FourPointX

Comment by spiritualspatula:
I'd chop a bit off the top and bottom, myself. The busy works for me, because of how insane the environment is, so full of things and distracting. I love the juxtaposition between him and the giant smiley face though, makes it a much more telling portrait than one might initially think.

carnie
by FourPointX

Comment by LVicari:
Hmmm. he sort of gets lost in the background..maybe bring him forward and use a shallow DOF and focus on him

baseball
by FourPointX

Comment by Mike:
critique club.

great composition. the leading lines from the wires, the circular shape of stands, the angles from the baselines and grass cuts. superb.

the colors are a bit over the top, the sky is dark and haloing around the clouds is distracting and it just looks unnatural.

i'd love to see you take another shot at the edit of this because it really has some fantastic elements.

baseball
by FourPointX

Comment by Melethia:
Nice perspective and quite cheerful.

baseball
by FourPointX

Comment by beatabg:
Great wide shot. The way the lines "divide" the sky is really cool.

if memory serves...
by FourPointX

Comment by tome:
Oh man, how could I not see this before? A classy elegant take on the challenge!
Btw if you have any spare DDR3, I could use one, 4Gb. :)

fleeting glimpse
by FourPointX

Comment by bspurgeon:
Great shadow. Imposing.

fleeting glimpse
by FourPointX

Comment by bvy:
Superb.

baseball
by FourPointX

Comment by mikeee:
Great wide angle shot but I think the processing is a bit harsh.

turn
by FourPointX

Comment by romil:
I see a little noise in the sky. And your main subject of motion blur is kinda on the left side which makes the viewer search for it.