Letting go of all your troubles...
by litbolti

Comment by OneSweetSin:
Critique Club

Nice work but I think your choice of putting the sun in the center is making the photo boring. Try putting it in the bottom third of the photo and I think it will add a lot more interest to it.

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Comment by nordic:
exposure on the left pulls my eye away from the subject - great photo though

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Comment by dhare:
I love it .. very bleak

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Comment by Catherine:
I know you can't help it - Mother Nature is a pretty headstrong old lady - but I find that my eye is drawn to the shafts of light in the left corner. Great idea. Aside from the lighting - excellent composition.

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Comment by aKiwi:
A bit too datrk

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Comment by e301:
Must surely have taken some patience to get this - or else pure fluke. Could have been an interesting shot, although I think perhaps you would need to frame things differently for it to be really successful, or at least crop with a more careful eye to what is the main subject of your shot - the impression is that this isn't cropped at all.

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Comment by tammy:
I like the shot - just don't think it represented of the theme very well.

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Comment by jpochard:
I think this needs to be clearer. I don't like the dark tones and the small focal point. Maybe it would have been better in color?

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Comment by dsray:
lost in the frame

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Comment by jonpink:
quite insipid sorry. Nothing here going on at all.