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Comment by ThingFish:
Interesting scene. Quite deep indeed.

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Comment by VitaminB:
Your black and white conversion could use more contrast.

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Comment by Carlo21:
Good shot but a bit to plain for me.

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Comment by zoodiac:
see this is the thing, there is space and it might be deep but its not taken so ... then it doesnt looks deep... its actually flat.
its grey ( I suggest to play with contrast) and well. that might do it.. but not this.. just three from me , sorry ;D


take care
brano

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Comment by smichener:
actually kind of bland- not enough contrast

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Comment by npasel:
Reminds me of my high school.

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Comment by tryals15:
The barrel distortion is aggravating; I like the b/w tones.

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Comment by JC_Homola:
I think a tighter crop would have added to the effect, the bright area on the left is a bit of a distraction jmo

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Comment by phylsy7:
I think this photo would have worked better had you cropped out the wall with the chair and the wall with the radiator...focusing completely on the length dow the corridor. Also more contrast brightness.

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Comment by Nuzzer:
Don't take this the wrong way but as I see DPC as a learning experience here is my frank critique:

This comes across as a snapshot. By that I mean that I feel that anybody standing where you were with a camera could have gone click and got this result. I think a photographer should aim to do more than that. I may be wrong and perhaps you do have more of a story to your shot but the fact is that it doesn't come across to the viewer.

As an example, if you were in Paris and saw the Eiffel Tower you could hold the camera and go click. You'd have a shot that millions of other tourists have and would be good as a record of your holiday. I think at DPC you need more than that. You need to consider the POV - make it something that enhances the tower (include a flowerbed or kissing couple in the foreground), make use of lighting (dusk for shadows), composition (maybe include the buildings beside it to get a sense of scale).

I hope this helps and please don't be offended, I'm only offering an opinion.