Not Quite Sun-Up
by GeneralE

Comment by LoudDog:
Greetings from the Critique Club GeneralE,

Very nice scene. It seems to be missing something to give it a wow factor though. It was probably a better shot 10 minutes after you took this, but then it would have been just in time. I like the clouds, but I don’t like the over all color of the photo. It’s kind of a dull shade and it over powers the small spot of sun.
I like silhouette shots, but I’d like to see something from the bottom coming up higher, maybe on the left side? A tree or a branch maybe? Right now it looks like a cluster of stuff along the bottom.
Overall I would have scored this a 5. It meets the challenge and it’s an attractive scene but it just seems to be missing something.

I hope you find my review helpful, if you have any questions feel free to PM me.

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by GeneralE

Comment by robs:
Nice idea but the blur is too much for my liking - tough to recognise.

Puddin' On The Ritz
by GeneralE

Comment by BMacD:
I would have prefered colour. Good pun shot!

Puddin' On The Ritz
by GeneralE

Comment by AzCKelly:
Nice concept, I think color would have really added to this picture, it seems a tad dark to me. Good composition.

Puddin' On The Ritz
by GeneralE

Comment by brizmama:
Groaner!!!! 8

Puddin' On The Ritz
by GeneralE

Comment by Art Roflmao:
Good idea, bad idea to go with BW, IMO. Good luck. :)

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Comment by rick13601:
I see what you were trying to do, but it's too fuzzy.

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Comment by itsgodswork:
a photograph with blurr makes the viewers eye frustating. its a turn off to the buyer when there is no composition or anything to say " thats what im looking for"
this photograph needs work and touch and a miracle

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Comment by Hendry Jacoby:
Abstract confusion is a powerful matter to shape. I love this sortt of thing. 10

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Comment by Dr.Confuser:
Without the title, I would not have been able to figure out what was being photographed. This is a matter of personal taste, but for me, I need something for my eye to rest on and I can't find anything here.